StaticLF's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~EnV~Play It (WIP)]

This is a pretty good loop but the fading in and out doesn't make it feel like a loop, but more like a short short song on repeat.

[ragfoivdjfz]

I'm not to sure what your doing with all these upload but this is definitely the best so far. It just sounds amazing, but a finished song would be great. Not to sure what to review about this, it all sounds good now please finish it.

[untitle.2]

I can see that you have made some necessary improvements to your song but could still use some work. It is better than before but it needs equalizing. The beat is a bit loud and drowns out your other pieces, especially the kick at the end of the beat, it kind of hurts my ears. One more thing is that this sounds more like techno then house, I'm not to sure but that is just my opinion.

3.5/5 Don't stop, you can achieve perfection with practice, hope this helps your out mate.

ruptor responds:

ok thnx

[untitle]

Okay I don't want be a jerk but, I have to be truthful. This song just seem like you threw a bunch of sounds together, the beat kind of fit but the pad in the middle of the song seemed out of place. You want to make a song that flows together and has sounds that compliment each other. another thing is your beat, I could tell it was the default claps, snares, etcetera. You could google up some packs to help your beats sound better and more fitting, here's a link that I found - but your lead and second lead were pretty good.Here is a site that I found useful Don't let my review keep you from stopping, but I would rather you take it as advice and improve from it. That's what reviews are for right.
2.5/5 Keep practicing, not bad for a start.

ruptor responds:

thnx for the advice but actualy not all wht u ust said is true..

[Serene Tranquility]

Hey man not bad, not bad at all, the only thing that I find a little troublesome is the length(not sure if this is complete or a work in progress), and the beat seem to be a bit overruling. I'm not saying that it is a bad beat but when you listen to the song it's pretty much what you hear over the other sounds and what not, a little bit of equalizing would help that.

4/5 Good stuff man hope this helps.

jasfab responds:

Thanks man! Yes, this is indeed work on progress. It has to be a lot longer and I haven't put much work in equalizing. But I wasn't aware of the the beat being overrulling so I will adapt that very quickly. Thanks for your helpful review!

[Norato - Hearth beat]

Wow dude this track was amazing it sounds very professional, the transitions were great and is very calming to listen to but the down sides would be that the drums are a bit loud and drown out the main beat a bit but not so loud that it becomes a problem though maybe turn them down a tad, another thing is the ending, it seems to be missing an outtro, and just ends abruptly, also the length of the track. From my opinion I seem to find that most trance song are rather long. If this song were longer it would be fantastic, giving your audience more to listen to.
4.5/5
Great work, keep it up I hope to see more.

[clockwork :: EX-EVO]

Wow that was great man, really liked the ending, it was set up well. All the different sounds playing together that well, interesting to listen to, keep it up.

MisterMonroe responds:

Second comment in one night? Huh... But yeah, after some harsh crit, I had to teach myself be less repetitive, or be repetitive properly- as well as save some instruments for last. That's obviously working, even if some of my more favorite pieces get a small bit. But thanks for the comment. I'm trying hard, and I already knew this was one of my best songs, even if it isn't much. Gifts seem to work out better than anything else, so maybe I should do more of those!

[Drowning into the Heavens]

Fantastic!!!

holy moley have i never heard anything so smooth and calm. this is one great piece of art. reminds me of the music on halo odst.