Although this was quiet humorous and the beat was really good in my opinion, the was a crackle in the music every now and then which I didn't like at all, it was disrupting the music and made it unenjoyable. Hope this can be fixed next time.

Wow that is amazing. I can feel just so much emotion from the singing alone. The filter of crackling in the into vocals is a bit of a minus for me. Other than that, damn good piece of work.

Damn son, that is off the chain right there! I'm impressed at how much you have done with just the demo. I would download it, but it is only 45 seconds. I guess my only complaints to this is that it is not long enough, and the bass on the kick is a little high. Maybe it is from the amount of repetition, or I have my volume up to high. Other than that, kudos bro.

You got some pretty cool sounds in there bro. I would say that the intro drags on a little to, needs more background, or something to help fill in the repetitive parts. One last thing is that the whole song could use more frequencies. To me it feels a little empty. Don't know what you were going for, just thought I would let you know.